mural project

[nibot]

Bree and I are working on a door mural.

[detail of the original drawing by Miruna Daniela Popescu]

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Dear Tobin,
first, I cannot hide my astonishment that you are using my drawing! I would have never imagined anybody would like it so much, I nearly forgot about it myself.

Second, there are two main things which I think should be changed (I hope my English would be good enough to explain ... with a pen it would be much easier :)

- the line on the right should come down a bit more, otherwise the channel becomes far too large and the location in Venice disappears - the channels in Venice are not wider than a narrow road;

- and even more important - there are no paddles in Venice boats!
if you want your picture to represent Venice you must get read of them!!!
You have to have a man standing on the boat with that long - whatever the name of that thing is :)

Regarding your two modern additions, I think it's very imaginative and ingenious :)

Best of luck and I'm looking forward to see it finished!
Miruna